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Originally Posted by Count Zero
Very well said, Ravens Cry. I love to see people passionate about this.
Nitpick: Paragraph 2 line three reads "...whats worth, some, are more then foolish, more then disillusioned..." It should read "...whats worse, some, are more than foolish, more than disillusioned..."
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*facepalm*
thank you very much will edit that. I also, looking at it again,I meant to say delusioned , which turns out may not be a word, but it should be.
Oh what the heckles cakes, I am going to use it anyway. And yes, 'than', 'then', always screw them up. In my haste, I didn't proof read as well as I should have, so thank you for taking the time to look this over.
[edit] I am sure there is some run on sentences, and my English teacher would crucify my grammar, but it gets the point across. For some reason I enjoy writing little speeches like this, full of my love of words and oratory. I wouldn't say I am good at this, but it is something I enjoy. And that is the point.