This is a fan fiction I've been writing on Marvel.com.
Tell me if you like it, please.

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Rovers forever! - ToSeek
"The only way to explore the universe is to go and look." - Brian Cox
Well, the best way to find out is to go there and, find out. - Raven's Cry
'Evolution and science are one thing, but you don’t mess with Yoko Ono. Everybody knows that. ' - 386sx

Interesting! VG fanfic maybe just what is needed to make a new generation interested in
manned spaceflight.

Excellent!

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Any day you wake up on "the right side of the dirt" is a good day.

T. Anderson

if the Fantastic Four was formed today, the leader would be a female of either Islamic, Asian, or Hispanic descent- and she'd probably be a lesbian or single mother or both or something like that- the flamey guy would be a vegetarian and drive a hybrid- and his fire would be some sort of magical clean combustion process that puts out no carbon emissions- the muscular rocky guy would be a misunderstood poet with a mysterious past, and the stretchy guy would be an African American from a rough neighborhood that has had a lot of hurdles to overcome in his life, but he has succeeded to make something of his life despite (and, perhaps, because) of that.

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"blacker than the blackest black... times infinity."- Nathan Explosion
The.. Best.. Thread..Ever...

Alright !

Excellent work KaiYeves,
Sorry to hear about the computer, hope you are back on line soon. It seems like you have a lot of fans on both sites, cheers

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"Nature is obliged to let reality determine its laws, whereas mathematics is under no such constraint."

Yes, if Marvel actually were to make it into a comic, that would be something. Sadly, I don't think the editors read the message boards.

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Rovers forever! - ToSeek
"The only way to explore the universe is to go and look." - Brian Cox
Well, the best way to find out is to go there and, find out. - Raven's Cry
'Evolution and science are one thing, but you don’t mess with Yoko Ono. Everybody knows that. ' - 386sx

Being the sort of writer who loves feedback, I've been meaning to ask: What did you like most about the story? What, if anything, did you dislike most?

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Rovers forever! - ToSeek
"The only way to explore the universe is to go and look." - Brian Cox
Well, the best way to find out is to go there and, find out. - Raven's Cry
'Evolution and science are one thing, but you don’t mess with Yoko Ono. Everybody knows that. ' - 386sx

Having more descriptive text and not just dialogue adds more colour to a story, but if this is for a comic then the graphics would make up for that.

Or a movie.

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Any day you wake up on "the right side of the dirt" is a good day.

T. Anderson

Yes, it's written in "comic book style". What did you like best?

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Rovers forever! - ToSeek
"The only way to explore the universe is to go and look." - Brian Cox
Well, the best way to find out is to go there and, find out. - Raven's Cry
'Evolution and science are one thing, but you don’t mess with Yoko Ono. Everybody knows that. ' - 386sx

Have you seen the recent movie... I believe it did a great job of bringing the Fantastic 4 into the modern world.

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I am Mugs, of the Alien clan of Usa, Nordamerica, a Terran, of Sol.

Mine: "Perception isn't reality. It's merely an abstraction thereof, and quite often not a very good one at that."

Heinlein's: "Staying young requires the unceasing cultivation of the ability to unlearn old falsehoods." "Freedom begins when you tell Ms. Grundy to go fly a kite."

Yes, I did. It was well done.

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Rovers forever! - ToSeek
"The only way to explore the universe is to go and look." - Brian Cox
Well, the best way to find out is to go there and, find out. - Raven's Cry
'Evolution and science are one thing, but you don’t mess with Yoko Ono. Everybody knows that. ' - 386sx