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I wonder why this one wasn't picked to pieces, it's a wonderfully bad example for the grammarians ![]()
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Henrik's correct that the sentence, the way it is written, would be referring to Lovell as being a dead ringer for Lovell. There's a name for this type of grammatical error - "misplaced modifier" is coming to mind, but I don't think it's right. ![]()
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Nit picking of nit picks that have been nit picked
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In that sentence, "who" obviously refers to Jim Lovell. Quite right. Further, Sean, take a "correct grammatical term" prize. It is indeed a misplaced modifier. "Who, at least in 1994, was almost a dead ringer for Lovell" is intended to modify something else; ergo, modifier. It is intended to modify "Kevin Costner" (I don't care how much he resembled anybody; I can't take Kevin Costner--and Tom Hanks can act circles 'round him). However, since it is placed directly after "Jim Lovell," that is the phrase it modifies. Ergo, the sentence is wrong. As to who/whom . . . the only rule of that I reliably remember well enough to explain it to anyone else is that "whom" always falls after a preposition. "To whom," for example. Putting it in the aforementioned sentence wouldn't change to whom (see?) the sentence referred. It just would've made the sentence even more wrong.
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I'm just wondering what the grammarmobile looks like, I like the idea of a grammarbelt though, not sure what you'd find in it, correction fluid presumably, not sure what else.
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Does that thing I said about the frogmen doing "thumbs up" instead of "okay" in that other thread count? Because in diver school, they said to never use "thumbs up" in your everyday life or you might do it underwater, where it means something completely different.
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I don't possess a grammarmobile yet, but I'm working on it. And, yes, I will have a label made saying just that.
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That said, a very brief search didn't turn it up. I have at least four candidates (in terms of a similarly brief memory search) for where this was explained: Kranz's book, Kraft's book, Moondust, or Apollo 13's commentary track with Jim Lovell. I suspect it's the latter.
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I can't remember where either, but I've heard the same thing. Basically, Kranz didn't say it because it wasn't necessary to say anything like that. Everybody in the MOCR and backrooms would have taken that attitude as a given.
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This allows the possibility that the scriptwriters wrote it because it sounded good, it stuck in the memory, and Kranz liked it enough to use it for his own book.
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I'll figure this out yet.
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