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A cliche that bothers me is when a person says that they can't explain something without showing it, and then when the audience sees whatever it is it's pretty obvious they could have explained in a few words.
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There's a term for this--"the stupid character" or something like that, because they can't figure out something really obvious or else it would give away part of the plot too early. I can't remember what the term is.
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You're right, there is, but I can only remember the inverse one. "Chewing the cabbage" means explaining something that all the characters would know but the audience wouldn't.
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I suppose "TV ropes" would be an entirely different website.
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Having a character who needs to have those things explained that the audience needs to know is a way to avoid the chewing of cabbages. Another would be to have characters imply knowledge without stating it and have the audience learn what they need that way, but that would leave some audience members hopelessly confused when they don't catch it.
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The video game Knights of the Old Republic 2 had a very nice way of reducing the time spent "chewing the cabbage". much of the exposition was in the form of your own dialogue choices, many of which lead to the exact same response from the NPC.
This site raises a very good example of what I mean (note: some not safe for work language, although it isn't especially gratuitous.) Quote:
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Of course, you can get away with including clunky lines like, "The king, your father," or "John Jenkins - you know, your best friend at school whose sister you briefly (and disastrously) dated," so long as you have non-clunky options which the player can choose instead. Still, one of my favourite dialogue things is when you are asked, "What makes you think we're wizards?" and one of the options is, "Because it says 'Wizard' when I move my mouse pointer over you." |
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You can also show the character getting a letter explaining an event she's invited to and reading it, so you don't have to later explain where she is or why.
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Still, it doesn't need to be clunky. A good enough writer can work in exposition without it looking like exposition. The best writers work it into the story so well the reader/viewer is unaware that it's anything but the natural progression of the story; that is, until someone asks them what the movie was about and they try to explain it!
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Some character will sell Girl Scout cookies, but they won't say "Girl Scout" they'll say some really unwitty parody name.
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You can be carrying a pistol, but if the bad guy wants to fight with a sword, that's what you fight him with. Oh wait, forgot Indiana Jones
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Or unless you're Sean Connery in "Untouchables." "Just like a WOP! Bringing a knife to a gunfight." |
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The phrase "where it all began" when used in commercials or trailers. For instance, I just saw a commercial which implied that the game Final Fantasy VII was "where it all began."
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Or "Now, the fate of (insert place here) depends on them".
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